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RE: "100 day Poetry Challenge [Day 90]" - Poetry -Oh Mademoiselle

in #steemitschoolpoetry • 6 years ago

Lovely poem... Great use of rhyme, timing and metaphors. Enjoyed the read. A periodic twinkle of greatness. Like what you did at the beginning. Brilliant.

Your last but one stanza seemed incomplete and short though. Big ups...
Finish hard!!

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     6 years ago 

    Thanks mate..I appreciate your feedback..I'll try to improve next time

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