SSP 100 Days Challenge (Day 94): XEROPHYTE

in #steemitschoolpoetry6 years ago (edited)

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This is my ninety-fourth entry for the Steemit School of Poetry 100 Days Challenge.

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XEROPHYTE

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dry rocks
spiky leaves
thorns
and more thorns
prickly green
scant green
harsh sun
breaks the rocks

harsh winds
want to uproot
every shoot

only the sturdies critters
can live here
as long as they find a shadow
as long as they don't need water

all layers of this geological cake
are exposed to the elements

a sea existed here
but dried out

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uncountable crust shifts
have turned this land into
crystals and hard edges

there's nothing soft here
nothing welcoming

yet life thrives
in that peculiar beauty
the beauty of the things that cost

the buoyancy of the fittest
the survival of the sturdiest

flaky rocks under your feet
rarely a jeep track

small leaves among long thorns

the wind bends trees into submission

and the morning dew is the only
water one would ever lick

and the cool nights the only
thing resembling any kind of comfort

this is nature's Sparta

hot sun
strong wind
thorny plants
small lizards

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NOTES

This poem talks about the austere beauty of the flora in Venezuela's Paraguaná peninsula.

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Original text from Sansón Carrasco

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De este lado de Venezuela, Sucre, también sentimos el mismo sol, miramos la misma vegetación y perseguimos también la pequeña brisa nocturna que nos hace felices. Te falta poco, mi estimado. Un abrazote!:)

Gracias una vez más por acompañarme en este viaje creativo, estimada Nancy

Le encontraste la profundidad a este tema amigo:

yet life thrives
in that peculiar beauty
the beauty of the things that cost

Esto me encanto, es como un consuelo: encontrar esa particular belleza en las cosas que cuestan.

Un gusto leerte, siempre :-)

Gracias por tu comentario, @inspiracion... esa línea la escribí como un zombie, pero evidentemente el subconsciente siempre se plasma.

You wrote well, have never saw xerophyte before

Thanks @riahdex for visiting me and appreciating my poem. God bless you.

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