Killed Love (#Day18)
What is more pleasant that the touch of sincerity?
What is more sincere than the smile of an infant?
What smiles can be more painful when extinguished?
But what's more perilous than the man with the needle and two hands?
Flowing liquid that tells of a live that hasn't been lived
Shining scissor that cuts love before its even rooted
Covered nose not to sense the cries in the blood
Here, Gutted minds break tears
Spare the needle
Keep the gloves
Let's live life
No matter the circumstance
This poem is for the steemit school 100 days poetry challenge.
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I like it a lot and well, yes, it's more honest than a baby's smile
Regards
FS
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Wow! When a smile is taken away from your face, it's really painful you know.
Keep up the good work @sammynathaniels.
Thanks for your encouragement!!
Direct and to the point. Poetry is often at its most powerful when motivated by strong belief, and you certainly don't take any prisoners! Thanks for sharing.
You are welcome
Congratulations! Your poem was featured in Poets United's Daily Dose #63.
Thanks, I really appreciate that
This is deep, and sad at the same time. The ability to move and change emotions of people just through a story or poetry is the ultimate gift. Great job Sammy.
Thanks so much