Would You Still Love Me? (Day 92)
I gave you the pen to write my life
Because I know you’ll not put a full stop
Even when I end my breaths
But what if I told you?
That I’m just a junk for words
Engraved on the tombstone of my late father
That this is not my life
I’m living a life that was lived before
Will you still hold the pen to my life?
I looked past my flaws
To build a galaxy with you
Even when I was short of stars
But what if I told you?
That your just a piece
Of my whole scheme?
Would you still blindly love me?
Or would you slap me in the face
Like these movie stars?
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Nice poem :)
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Well, well written i must say.
I like your opening lines, they're very attractive considering the metaphor therein. They attracted me to this very poem.
I still like how you allude the reality of your love to the galaxy of stars.
The structure of your poem makes it look somehow cramped though.
Overall, Its nice.