War of betrayal and love Day 5 (Poetry)

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Have you forgotten the days when our love flowed?

I said then we burned the deserts

Your words are still remembered in my nights and in my day

Oh my heart is on my frankness


I miss her, and with her are my ruins

Woe to you every hour we spent together

Do I blame you or blame my fate?

How much I played with my captive heart and how much


I stole my innocent smiles

Princess I was always in front of my eyes

Now I have become a bold love

 Speak something


Do you fatten this love?

After committing a sin

And your sin is not a sin

And love in what attracts

You lie to me and tell me what betrayed me


You face me with lies and lies

Your imagination has become a mirage for me

And your love has become dust for me

She killed me and we together in a love square


You bear the sword of betrayal

And I carry your heart as it is faithful

Go now and do not come near me

Never hurt my heart

Go now and get away


To live alone this torment

My wishes and my dreams are all gone

Woe to you, who you are in my prayers cause

Live and fade your banner

Love will inevitably not forget


You will taste what you have suffered from

But more severe than Dak punishment

Then you would dream to come back between me

Then you will know that I am a thief

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Hey mate, just wanted to call attention to a favorite line of yours here:

I miss her, and with her are my ruins

enjoyed the metaphor you put in here at the end.

Thank you for sharing your poem.

thnx =D
and welcome =)

Nice poem, when love crushes , the pain last a lifetime, good job man.

thnx and welcome

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