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RE: (Steemit School Poetry | 100 Day Challenge | Day 3) NO WIFI HERE
This is an epic piece, @ayahkasih, you crushed this!
You can really see your experience with poetry shine through the composition of this piece, it' almost impossible to tell that english is your second language, you did such a great job with the translation.
the use of imagery to set the scene and guide the reader, strong lines carrying storytelling elements and consistent pacing (both visually and with your lines) was excellent.
Great piece, mate, the effort really shows through.
Coming from you, I feel like rocketing to the moon.
Thank you, mate! I really appreciate this 😊
wouldn't say it if I didn't mean it, good sir, will continue to come back and read your writings every here and there through the journey - thank you for sharing and joining.