Love Is The Trap [#DAY 1] 100 Days of Poetry Challenge
I wonder what the secret of your body
I love you as I love the smell of the woods in the forest just after the rain
I want to get lost in your body
Enjoying to all your beauty even if makes me dying
I wonder what the secret of your eyes
Like a magnet, keeps me pulled toward you.
When you just look at me for a moment, I want more.
Hopefully the time can be stopped
I wonder what the secret of your voice
Such a beautiful song, makes me keep wanting to hear your voice.
When you just talk for a while, I want more conversation.
I hate when you shut up
Because you are a trap
And I'm willing to enjoy your trap.
Note
I'm a beginner writer in English
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Nice try
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Wonderful effort, keep it up girl ;-)
Hi @anggreklestari, thank you for your entry #1! I appreciate you expressing your genuine feeling. Placed you in the beginner category. You followed all the guidelines, so thank you :-)
to express all these gorgeous observations and feeling in your second language, @anggreklestari, it shows that you have the voice and heart of a poet in you and I'm so excited to see the growth that the 100 day poetry initiative will bring in your writings!
Thank you for sharing.
Keep writing, girl! 👍😊