100 DAYS OF POETRY: DAY 23
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Why I Talk Too Much
By Stephen Martin
unrepentant remarks
about mystery
often lead
to disputes.
But I, The Pickled Pirate King
Spray them fully automatic
Into the chocolate universe.
experimentation cures boredom
and even when things explode
often discoveries are made.
So you, my Friend
Will you join me in this flagrant
Popping off?
structure is tantamount to architecture
but so is vision
and the open pierrettes inspire.
And we, Cobbled Cosmos Cousins
Manifest far more
Than those laying pavement.
We — The Alphabetic Soup
Slurp at our lives.
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Your alternating of capitals in your soup was an interesting process to analyze how it affected the voice I read in.
Always enjoy jumping over to be challenged by your writing, my friend.
Lol. Yeah, I'm definitely challenged. Glad I could
spill some of that challenge over to you. 😎
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Loving this or Pirate King of pickles ;) <3
The words just kind of escaped and once they did I had to let them live, although honestly I almost killed them. Lol.
glad you didn't :)
The imagery here is wonderful. It slowly hooked me, requiring several reads to contemplate and ponder on what these words, combined, were saying. But it's there, richly, and in multiple layers.
These grabbed me the most. We are world builders, in unison, whether understood or not.
Thanks for your depth of reading. It's nice to know my poetry is being contemplated.