Life of a Poet
"Life of a Poet"
Words they cleanse me
free me
to be....linen white
to see
with new sight
Words ignite me
I take a ride
and blast through the fires
deep inside
Only to be quiet....and drown
in the stillness all around
slowwwww, motion cause
and effect shards of glass all around
Reflecting sunlight through crisp morning air
stepping gently with spaces to spare
For the Words that cleanse me
free me
to be....linen white
to see
with new sight.....tonight
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I really liked how you used repetition, capitalization, punctuation, and imagery to create almost a trance-like state for the reader. It was almost like you brought the reader through the cleansing process that you were describing. Almost like we were thrown into a cosmic washing machine. Great job.
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@youhavewings,
Well done. Some very evocative imagery.
Thank you so much, Quillfire. What it feels like