Obviously (original poetry)

in #steemitbloggers6 years ago (edited)

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To be creative one must create
Instead of watching sedative debates
To be a writer one must write
It's when he starts he has all the might

Obviously, it is him choosing the sight
He knows what it is like
To think of what's right

Decision making actions
Who's bright and who's tight?
Different affections
Some end up in a fight

Your body, your life
It is your choice to thrive
Soak up the knowledge
Share wisdom and ride

Enjoy what you have
What you do not
Don't hide

Be bold and be wild
There is only one side

One vision
One voice in our heads
Our guide

Universal frequency
Love
One mind

be grateful for the life you are having right now, use the time right and have a calm mind

Peace - Love - Gratitude

Mindset - Attitude


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@spellmaker,

Obviously, it is him choosing the sight
He knows what it is like
To think of what's right

Decision making actions
Who's bright and who's tight?
Different affections
Some end up in a fight

It is precisely this attitude that gets me into so much trouble. :-)

Good write. Always appreciate it when poets give us a taste of verse.

This is my first day in Steemit Bloggers. Now that I know you're a Fellow SB poet, I'll be following your work more closely.

Quill.

I like it a lot and can completely relate.

Knowledge is powerful but information can be toxic as our mind tends to get addicted to it. If we don't do anything with all of the information that we consume, transform it and create something new with it, become wiser through applying it, it will only pull us down.

It's great to get such a feedback and you are right! Too much knowledge can come with worry and doubt.

Thanks for being here and have a wonderful life!

To be creative one must create
Instead of watching sedative debates

I think my favorite lines were the opening ones @spellmaker. I can completely relate as I find TV and the ongoing centuries old debates around politics and power completely unfulfilling as a source of inspiration in my writing or life. I'm sure some find it all fascinating but it's just depressing to me.

Enjoy what you have
What you do not
Don't hide

Be bold and be wild
There is only one side

One vision
One voice in our heads

Also these lines. Great spirit of hope in these verses. I really liked the poem :-)

Thank you! It is wonderful to get such a review!

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