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RE: This is Gary. Gary is a Murderer. (Steemitbloggers Contest)
So cool, once I realised what Beth was doing it was like wait. WTF. Enjoyed the everyday super dressed down in jeans and tshirt approach. Does let me think of Jessica but I only watched 10min of that before I had to stop or break the screen. I like how Beth gained a lot more character very fast.
I don't know who Jessica is, but I'm glad you liked the story. I wasn't too sure of it at first, but I finally got it out of my head in some semblance of order!
I enjoyed it a lot, order can be overrated... maybe I just say that since you have more structure in your story than I can wish to accomplish. lol
Jessica Jones that cry baby superhero well one of the cry baby superheroes.
Ahhhh! I actually skimmed back over my story thinking I had forgotten a character I'd named Jessica :) I'm more than a little scattered, especially when it comes to writing!