Hi @bashadow. Yes, this is a nice post, and I like some of your other content as well. After reading a few paragraphs it looks like this post primarily needs some basic cleaning-up of punctuation and some other basic. It's also a bit lengthy, but let me see if I can find enough time/energy today to give it a run-through. I have located you on Steemit Chat, and since I do not want to clog the comments section with all of that text I will send it to you in Word format through Steemit Chat, if/when I finish it. Cool?