Yeah, cool. I'm sure you guys were under tremendous pressure at that point so I completely understand!! I'm still gna check out some of your other stories as well :) With regards to throwing out an edited version I think, if nothing else, it could be an interesting experiment :). I'm really starting to like the concept of taking a good story and reading them back to back. One with grammatical errors and the other not. It will kind of be like an audio visual display of what happens when you're busy reading. As you read you can get stuck on points if you're struggling with the grammar. As for the story, well, idk. I think it should probably be a slightly shorter story. Then again, I've never tried anything like that before so I could be wrong. What are your thoughts and would you like it if I did so with one of your stories i.e. the first one? :):) Thanks for the upvotes on my comments :)