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RE: Fiction Frenzy: A Community Collaboration -- Round Seven
I barely touched in terms of revision. I just sorted out the tense problems and a few typos.
Great #corestory piece by the way. I wonder where this thing will go next...
Yeah, it's probably best to wait until there's more for any hardcore revision. Thanks and I know, right? @therealpaul is joining us, I think @fisteganos is waiting to hear from @writingamigo to see if he's going to do the next part.
You should add the animation I shared in the corestory channel to your post. It has a clickable link that will take anyone who wants to get involved directly to the chatroom.
Oh, didn't see that, will do ;)
Unless Amanak exists outside of the Game of Thrones? LOL
Lol. Are you sure it's one of your favourites?
The quote on my profile is from Game of Thrones, but the location is from the universe I created for my novel.
That's Amanak, one of the continents. Khyra is at the top near the huge lake.
I chose it as my location because one of the characters that lives in Khyra is very loosely based on myself.
I agree. There's the usual social media (which I barely use but do have accounts for). I'll have to think on that.
I resteemed this as well ;) I like that these two projects are similar, but the different lengths change things significantly.
Actually, I did see that, just forgot. Okay, done :)
Once the story starts to take shape, we should share it elsewhere, as people who want to get involved would then come and sign up to Steemit to take part.
I'm just not sure where would be the best place(s) to share it..
Also, I've been attempting to guess where you're from...(that's my way of asking) assuming you don't actually live in the fictional realm of one of my all time favorite shows haha!
What show is that?
And what guesses have you come up with so far?
I'll have to check out your novel...can you put the link the first chapter in a comment, or chat? :)
Sure. I'll dig it up shortly as I'm just in the middle of something.
https://steemit.com/story/@son-of-satire/blood-oaths-and-offerings-an-original-novel-part-1-prologue
There it is. Warning.. It's pretty long. There also may be a couple of typos.. I will sort them out come March when the hardfork takes effect.
EDIT: I just reread it and it's actually written so poorly in comparison to the last few chapters. The prologue was the first piece of fiction I ever attempted to write, and seeing how much I have improved since then is actually very inspiring. If I can do so much better after only six chapters, I wonder how well I will be writing after a hundred?
Haha!! I made an assumption, obviously, but actually when I typed that place in google it came up with your game of thrones quote, so I'm guessing google took it from your page!!
Oh and...I'm terrible at remembering names of fictional places. It didn't sound familiar, but most likely other than obvious ones like winterfell there are other towns etc. in the show that I wouldn't know ;)