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RE: YOU WILL SUCCEED WHERE OTHERS FAIL! Avoid Rookie Mistakes on Steemit
Beautifully crafted posts, nice added value, solid writing! Great headline and YODA! Yeah, great job!
Now the critique. 2 things. First, the assignment was to roll in the bucket brigade techique. Easiest way to fix that would be, promise to share the magical editor that makes html so much easier, then remind them you're going, but wait, etc, and reveal it at the end. Also, each post is supposed to have a link to dolphinschool.
Great tips, over all a successful post, with 32 views so far and 16 votes. If you decide to edit those two things in, let me know and I'll consider it for revenue share tonight. Thanks man, great work!
You're right, but I think that delivering earlier on the post might help the readers stick together till the end
I edited the link to the bootcamp, i totally forget about it
Well, if you want that effect, try having two or more elements in your reveal. Then dole them out. To get them to the end, use a payoff there, but don't tell them it's going to be at the end, or they'll just skip ahead. I would definitely recomend playing up the editor a little more, what has it done for you? Sure, effiiciency, but, I was able to get my story finished in time to do x.