THE BELLS

in #steemit6 years ago (edited)

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Let the bells toll

With each a story told ,
On the green hills by the old folks
How the priests walks down the aisle ,
Preaching repentance to the lost souls .
For the farmers walking by his crops, burning and cutting shrubs.
For Crusaders in search of the truth
Holding keys that hold men from their roots.

Let the bells toll

For lovers in the park,
In each others arms listening to heartbeats
For Grandpa taking a walk for sunshine
Reaching deep his pocket for some moonshine
Travellers walking to Neverland following owl hoots,
For the cobblers running against time has to put some shine on the king's boot.

Let the bells toll

For the thief down the Parker's,
Warning that the day might be for the Parker's
For the dead man
Whose family runs from merry
Even drinks of berries
As he is sent home

Let the bells toll

As the Reaper walks through the hall
Holding in his hands keys to afterlife.
On his way to the old folks
Hiding underneath the invincible cloak
For each man a new story to tell.
All beginning when the bell tolls.

.....kazer 2018 (am in the wind)
Tm-Narcissus...Tm-beast....Tm-god
Images from pixabay.

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I liked how the last part of the poem introduces a new powerful element in the story, the Reaper, and how you ended the last stanzas with the circle of life. Beautiful!

Thanks so much @lymepoet , ion know if i say that was my intentions , am just happy that i did it some justice and you stopped by to appreciate it. Jah bless ..keep it skianking (am in the wind)

Lovely lines..Now a day steemit made me another habit...To enjoy poems that i was never used to earlier...

Thanks you

Thanks so much @angelro. Its really nice when people love what you do and it makes an impact. I appreciate you stopping by and finding it worthwhile. Thanks to steemit on your account 😂😂😂...jah bless (am in the wind).

You are most welcome..Keep on writing..
Stay blessed

Nicely chosen image - good poetry. Though several times, you have "Let the bells tool" instead of "Let the bells toll."

Owwwh thanks so much i hardly noticed. Normally it would have been highlighted and i correct it but since the word "tool" exists it was a bit difficult. Thanks so much @viking-ventures i appreciate your kind words and acknowledgment . Jab bless....(am in the wind)

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A wonderful and quite powerful poem. I like the depth it holds. And I like the silly typing mistakes 😂😂. Overall a good one.

😂😂😂 i think thats shows the imperfection of MAN. You know for me "things always deeper than the surface". Thanks for stopping by mami @illusions16. Jah bless (am in the wind)

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