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Hi @hilladigahackles :)

IMHO, I like the track overall. Perhaps a few things that I would consider...

  1. Shorten the intro from 2m 25s, down to say maybe 30-45 seconds.
  2. Add in an extra layer of bass underneath your main bass, or adjust the EQ a bit to give your low end some accents here and there.
  3. Add a compressor to your vocal clips, and a separate eq. to help some reduce some of the bg noise.
  4. Adjust the EQ overall, your low and mid frequencies are shallow, compared to your high.

I get where you are going with your composition, and I epsecially dig it from 4:45 onwards, congrats on the track. :-) Nice work.

Namaste

No problem, anytime my friend. :-)

Have a great day!

Peace.

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