Hahaha thanks for being honest my dude! :)

Yeah, see what happened was I wrote the entire article out, and it initially had 4 main paragraphs of info. So what I did is I simply made the first 2 paragraphs 'part 1', and the second 2, part 2. So yeah, I agree it could've been constructed better lol.

So what's the conclusion here? Do you think I shouldn't do it like this in the future? Is it not good? Or do you think it can work fine?

Thanks brother!