Hey there, great advice! Just some suggestions: it can help to use a picture in the post and in my opinion it would be really helpful if there was more space between paragraphs. (So instead of 1 big block of text, make 5-7 smaller blocks, makes it easier to read. You already started new lines, so just add one more empty line, it will look better.) Good luck! Hope you get an upvote from @originalworks