RE: [Steemhunt] Category of Airdrops

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didic (68)in #steemhunt • 6 years ago

This was, in many ways, an excellent update. It presented a great deal of information that is relevant to all SH users and also to prospective users. It was very well illustrated with graphics, and generally well organized.

The post could definitely be improved in terms of style and grammar, however. At points, it was a bit difficult to understand due to those issues, and I had to read some sentences a couple of times. I would be happy to provide examples in a follow-up comment if wanted.

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jayplayco (77) 6 years ago

Hi didic, sure I am always interested to improve the grammar and also trying to use your tips for the next article. It is not always successful but I guess it will be a slow progress :)

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didic (68) 6 years ago

Cool. Let's talk about some examples!

When writing articles about Steemhunt and promoting it on Steemit or Medium, Reddit or Facebook like platforms, the Steemhunt team is reviewing these contributions on a weekly base and airdropping larger amounts of Hunt tokens to the contributor.

This should maybe not be a single sentence. And it uses the wrong tenses. And it's needlessly convoluted. So let's do a edited version:

"When you write articles about Steemhunt and promote it on Steemit or Medium, Reddit or social networks such as Facebook, the Steemhunt team reviews these contributions. These reviews are done on a weekly base, and the contributors receive a large amount of Hunt tokens."

I have seen Hunt token drops up to 1.000 tokens and more per week.

It's either "up to" or "and more." It can't be both. I would replace "up to" with a simple "of."

Copy and paste that link on different kind of platforms like Reddit, etc.

It's either "a different kind" or "different kinds" without the "a."

I have as an example created different boards on Pinterest with specific themes and planning to increase the number of boards with cool hunts to engage users on Pinterest liking them.

This needs commas so badly. And it is convoluted, and has mixed tenses. And should probably be multiple sentences. For instance:

I have, for instance, created different boards on Pinterest with specific themes. I'm planning to increase the number of boards with cool hunts, to engage with users on Pinterest who like them.

These are some examples of the issues found in the post.

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