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RE: Steem Merchants: Steelus

in #steem6 years ago

It's great to see high quality products available for Steem. I look forward to seeing more of your company and what appear to be well made belts as you prosper and expand your product line as well.

One thing that I thought I'd mention was a line in your post that seemed poorly worded. I had to read it a couple times before I actually gave up trying to grasp what the intended point was.

"Steelus, is a belt brand for men in the process of launching their feminine line."

First, the comma after Steelus is unnecessary. You should just remove it.

Second, you should make this two separate sentences, as it appears to be a product for men that are seeking to begin being feminine. I suspect you mean that Steelus is going to be launching a line of products for women soon, but the wording is awkward enough (and the world weird enough lately) that I remain unsure of your actual intent.

I wish you the very best success in your endeavor.

Thanks!

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Thank you very much for the suggestions, and the corrections were already made in the publication. The female line of belts will not replace the male line but now the brand will have both lines.

I'm happy I could be of any help to a new way to promote Steem.

Thanks!

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