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RE: Steemit Rap Verse (Lyrics Only)
Not bad. Would changing
"not bad for a kid wit no college degree"
to
"not bad for a kid wit no degrees"
help the flow?
Also, does "an urgency" make more sense because "gettin" in the previous bar ends with "n"?
Lastly, do you plan on uploading it to dtube? Can't wait.
I'm still tweaking it a bit but yes I do plan on uploading to dtube