RE: imToken Wallet Review- Securely store and manage your Cryptocurrencies - Task #15 by Oracle-D
Hello, @alokkumar121!
Thank you for your contribution. This is an interesting project, and you did a good job of providing useful information about its basic features. However, I have to admit that I wanted to read a little bit more about the project itself.
Regardless, you did a really good job. Your review is well-illustrated with relevant visuals, and you also took the time to share valuable information about your personal knowledge and views. I am happy you took my advice, and hope to see more of the same in your future contributions.
That said, the writing of this post was not good enough, I'm afraid. There were serious issues of grammar, style and proofreading, making some parts of your text difficult to comprehend. I would be happy to cite a few examples in a follow-up comment if you wish.
Nevertheless, I appreciate the effort you put into your work. Your content quality has improved, but you still need to work on your writing skills.
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Hi @lordneroo
Thank you so much for the feedback and it matters a lot me beacuse I get to know the area of my improvement.
I have noted on your points and my future submissions will be more detailed and grammatically correct.
Thank you so much.
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Thank you for your review, @lordneroo! Keep up the good work!