A Bottled Message: (A Bottled Feeling), Stach 199 Words Short Story Contest.
"I understand what you are going through, even if i have no experience about it", says Derrick
"No, you can't understand. How do i tell my father i am in love with my cousin?", Carrick shouted.
"He is hurting but how do you tell a man in love, to tone it down?", Derrick thought.
"In the olden days, people sometimes write their feelings in a paper then put it in a bottle, and send it across the ocean", says Derrick.
"So, how does this help my problem?", Carrick answered uninterested.
"It's an ancient practice where you write your feelings down, hoping someone else sees it. Some do it to get a pen pal, some use it as a sort of 'confessional', entrusting apologies and farewells, some use it to say goodbye to loved ones. Only you can decide why you want to send it, and maybe, you can find someone in such a situation too, and fate might lead you two together", explained Derrick.
"A crazy idea, but then, if it gets rid of this unexpected feelings, and seeing i have nothing to lose, i can use it to say goodbye to this feeling, and i hope it helps".
WORD COUNT: 199.
Nice write-up
Thank you.
Bros nawa, have you tried it? Me i dont think i will even open something inside bottle i found in the ocean, before yemoja will go and swear for my enemy. Tufia i wont even touch the bottle sef, let the problem be going
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha. You cracked me up.
Its said that, a problem share is half solved. Doing that will make you feel that you really talked to someone. Good write up
You are right. Thank you so much sir.