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RE: Fall between the lines

in #spokenword7 years ago

There are lots of good tid bits in this one. I l9ved the alliteration and how you hit the rhymes at all the right times (now you've got me doing it!). This is one of my favorites from you. Great write.

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Oh my, Moe, thank you.

I really toiled with this one, it was in block form for a while and then I edited it down to more rhythmic ditty -- I still love the way in which it was but it needed to be what it became. ;)

<3

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