I've loved fantasy-fiction for as long as I can remember. Tolkien, Brooks... all of the memorable ones. This seems to be right in line with perhaps the "known titles", creating a back story and history. Giving the Splinterlands an extra appeal, than 'just another game'.. you know?
Only thing that set my OCD alarm off...
She closed her eyes and will all the might she had left she summoned him.
I'm betting you meant "with" not "will"? Not downing your wondering story at all. Rather... an honest and positive critique my friend...
You are on to something here... I'd say please do keep creating your story@!
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Keep up the great work!
The #spreadlovenotwar curation campaign is under the guidance of witnesses @enginewitty and @untersatz.
Thanks for reading and providing some good feedback. I fixed that mistake.