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RE: The Fall of Anumun

in #splinterlands7 years ago

I have never really read any Splinterlands lore, and I surely enjoyed this one.

Lyanna, the spirit of the forest is my favorite summoner to use, I never imagined her working together with Alric, interesting perspective. Sometimes I wish I could combine my decks and be "extra strong."

I think your story needs more smells. The smell of the fire, the smell of the rotting flesh of the giants, or maybe the smell of magic cleaning it all up.

Thanks for sharing, I found you on the Pimp your post site.

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Yes, one of my weaknesses is adding more descriptive stuff. Like smells and feelings. I will try to remember that for the next part. Thank you

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