Un Poema: La Ceguera del Alma

in #spanish7 years ago

En los días más fríos, de mi alma sale un olor
enfermizo que me cubre el cuerpo ya endurecido,
permitiendo que allí también se instale el dolor,
del día en que te había totalmente conocido.

Ya no tengo más tanta fuerza para, hasta mismo,
levantarme de la cama. Mis ojos un tanto parados
en el cielo de mi cuarto oscuro como un abismo,
no apagan tu imagen de mis párpados hinchados.

Te seguí en mis más profundas pesadillas de amor,
sueños morbosos involucrados en el humo del umbral,
humo de tu cigarrillo demoníaco e insoportable.

Te busqué y no comprendí que fui mi propio traidor,
de tan ciego que no pudo percibir el pesado mal,
de no entender que para mí tu amor no era alcanzable.

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¡Gracias por leer mi publicación!
@manandezo

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nice post @manandezo
i like, thanks for sharing

Thank you so much @silvia! Your comment motivates me and more to come tomorrow! =)

Hola mi amigo .... Estas hermosas palabras

Gracias querido @mars9! Hoy intenteré publicar otros más! =)

Muy buen poema amigo! Un placer leerte! Quien no habra soñado con ese alguien. Y encima esta chica fumaba tb asi que me pega justo el poema! Abzo grande!

Gracias amigo @tincho! Sí, la pizpireta fumaba y no podría más seguir adelante!

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