La noche más oscura / Poema

in #spanish7 years ago (edited)


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Nacemos en un sueño eterno
Donde solo la duda puedes despertarnos
Sólo ella puede encender la llama
Esa que dirige y devora toda fortificación
Mientras quiero ahogarme con los seres del mar
La luna me observa con nostalgia
En esta la noche más oscura
Abrazándome y diciéndome
Por la mañana todo terminará
Y el arco iris te besará la frente

By @leviatan

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no te llegan comentarios que valen la pena.

yo creo que te he visto por allí creo

No sé, he conocido approx 10 mil gente en dos semanas.

pero te he visto en cervantes tal vez.
¿Publicas en inglés también? O ¿solo en cristiano, como la llama mi novia?

pues, un placer y un saludo.

el poema bien, pero yo, si fueras tu, experimenta con romper las lineas aun mas

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I expect same from you :)

Great post Thanks for sharing

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