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Still We All Fall Down

Waking up my window faces east
Time resets then rises bright and free
Turn the faucet watch the window steam
Water every day till wither cease

Lets give it all another try
Standing up we praise the sky
Still we all fall down, yeah we all fall down

Talk is louder when our wisdom sleeps
What I said to you I meant for me
Cross the water through the morning leaves
I'll show you how to let the landmarks be

Still I swear I heard you call
Feeling mighty walking tall
Still we all fall down
Yeah we all fall down
Still we all fall down
Yeah we all fall down

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amazing, I like singers ☺

I can hear the harmony opportunities all over that! Great song!

beautiful melody dude!! great job!! I really like this open mic !! ;)

Nice. I like the outdoors thing too...it fits the tamber of your song well. Thanks for sharing.

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You sound really good so please remember next week and thanks for playing Steemit Open Mic.

Roger that, thanks :)

Good song there my friend.

Great song... well done!

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