Well this is entirely subjective, it actually sounds great the way it is.
I would pull back on the kick a little bit, it's quite overbearing, especially in the beginning.
Maybe the same with the keys at the end of the track.
The balance between percs and melody is great, and I really like the way you've use the stereo field. Not a bad mix by a long shot, just not the mix I would have gone for.
Which elements?
Well this is entirely subjective, it actually sounds great the way it is.
I would pull back on the kick a little bit, it's quite overbearing, especially in the beginning.
Maybe the same with the keys at the end of the track.
The balance between percs and melody is great, and I really like the way you've use the stereo field. Not a bad mix by a long shot, just not the mix I would have gone for.
I gotcha. Thanks for your input though. I also just read your profile description, so now I got a better idea where you're coming from, haha!