I'm a jazz lover. Its musicality moves me to the bone. I think jazz is a form of expression, which talks about social things, but also about love. I find your piece interesting. Because not only does it have a certain cadence, a certain compass and swing, but the lyrics do not move away from the social, from the intimate of the human being. I also find the chorus sticky and rhythmic. Too bad you didn't present the complete piece, with music and everything. So it's very difficult to fully appreciate its quality. Thanks for sharing your art, @zentalk