RE: Something New You Would Love to Know About: Snax.One Be Rewarded for Social Activity
Hello, @mittymartz!
Thank you for the contribution. This is a promising project, and you managed to compose an interesting blog post about it. Your post is also well-illustrated with relevant visual content.
I like all the information about the project itself, and I appreciate the fact that you took the time to explain the registration process step by step. I think that users looking to get started on Snax will find your post very helpful. Keep up the good work.
That said, I think that your post could have been better written. There were issues of style and proofreading, and I would be happy to provide a few examples in a follow-up comment, if you wish.
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Hello!
I will cite a few examples for you:
This sentence should read: "Decentralization is when power is being distributed..."
Let me rephrase that: "Snax is an Open-source decentralized platform that rewards users with snax tokens for using social media platforms."
I would rephrase that as well: "Snax allows you to send tokens to other users without paying any transaction fees, and the weight of your content is what determines the amount of snax tokens you get."
This wall of text is just one sentence, and this is something you should avoid doing. Long and convoluted sentences lead to errors, and make your text hard to read.
I hope you will find this comment useful.
Have a good day!
Thanks ....the comment is very useful and helpful
I would walk on my sentence construction
Thank you for your review, @lordneroo! Keep up the good work!