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RE: Journal - A Short Story Part 1
Great premise. I loved it. Frost's Stopping by Wood on a Snowy Evening, one of my favorite poems by an american poet. It makes for a solid background and raises expectations.
I am looking forward to reading the upcoming parts.
Time traveling has always been a shaky material, really hard to tie together in a way that would make sense for the average reader. Rounded characters and movign stories help. I think you have that here.
Thanks for reading and commenting, @hlezama! If you're interested in more of the story, here is Part 2:
https://steemit.com/short-story/@phoenix32/journal-a-short-story-part-2