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RE: Steemits Got Talent Entry 1 Week #4 - THE TRAP OF BEAUTY (Original Poetry)
I like the idea in the poem, but one thing that defines the beauty with the face is the facial expression. One do not look at your arm, or legs and say that you are beautiful. Yeah, one can say about a figure being perfect or sexy, but that doesn't mean that you will be attractive to the person. Attraction and beauty comes with the expression, and expressions come from emotional intelligence. So, if someone compliments you with the word 'beautiful', it doesn't mean he is commenting just for your skin color or eye color, it is for your intelligence, which you express.
Thank you for the comment sanjay, but I would appreciate if people call me intelligent if they think I am so. Placing the wrong words would obviously leave a wrong impression. And also, there are unknown people also who call other people beautiful without even actually knowing them. That is why people fall in love so quick and get separated even more quickly. What do you think?
Well, this makes me think a bit more. You said 'wrong impression' but how does that make a wrong impression? I think 'beautiful' combines everything and expresses the interest in a somewhat romantic way. It is always your choice to show it back or not. I don't think it is wrong to have romantic interests, it is natural. You also might have your own, and to show it to the person of your interest you would also use some words, maybe 'handsome' etc. And that is completely okay I think, not wrong. Emotional intelligence attracts people socially and if you get a lot of 'beautiful' word then you must be socially very good. Thats all, I would say.
Anyway, putting our views aside, you did a great job with the poem, expressed yourself well and words rhymes well.