Julie, I hear you, and I congratulate you on being a working Hollywood writer with actual credits. However, as Vcelier said, I'm not a guru or pretending to be one. I encourage everyone to constructively pick apart anything I say in the hope of building something better. The fun is in the doing - encouraging people to pick up a pen and start. Nonetheless, with respect, you lost me with your "Save the Cat" comments. To suggest you speak for everyone in 'Hollywood' is absurd. You're entitled to your own opinion. But please don't insult us with your excessive pretentiousness. Good luck in your future endeavours.