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RE: New Allies [Original Novel] Ragnarok Conspiracy (Part Five Chapter Six)

in #scifi6 years ago

Typos:

paragraph 1: disbelieve -> disbelief | 'her' -> italics (twice)
paragraph 2: construction light that was -> construction lights that were | relatively flat -> relatively-flat
paragraph 3: kid, his -> kid, but his | agent if indeed -> agent&emdash;if indeed | war and had fled -> war and he had fled
paragraph 5: before and -> before, and | much more comforting -> much-more-comforting | moon reality were -> moon reality was | But it weren't -> But it wasn't
paragraph 6: iree -> fine (?)
paragraph 7: old school filament based -> old-school filament-based | led -> LED | full spectrum -> full-spectrum | filament based -> filament-based | operative used -> operative, used
paragraph 8: Three -> three
paragraph 9: take the weapons -> Take the weapons | checkpoint one and two -> checkpoints one and two
paragraph 10: being objected -> being, objected
paragraph 11: being only slightly -> although only slightly | described, became -> described became | there, motionlessly -> there motionlessley
paragraph 12: almost hundred -> almost a hundred
paragraph 16: of his back -> off his back | now, It -> now, it
paragraph 17: aim. Straight -> aim straight | huge, no way -> huge, but there was no way | time, a sharp -> time, he felt a sharp | backwards, to the ground -> backwards to the ground | shortly spaces -> shortly-spaced | real strong man -> very strong man
paragraph 18: shaking his head -> shaking its head
paragraph 20: size even -> size, even
paragraph 25: soldier." -> soldier,"
paragraph 26: hominid that -> hominid who | mind, his instincts -> mind and his instincts

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