This is splendid, I noticed you did a whole lot trying to describe the scene of your prose fiction, the way you used literary devices to narrate the sequence of nature that surrounded Nerani was just too amazing.
I love the fact that you started the story at the climax where Nerani was and then anti climaxed backed to when he was abducted to be a literate instructor as well. It showed how crafty you were with your story line.
It's beautifully written, I feel the way Nerani was abducted was the reason why he was an unkind teacher, however the way he dealt with Garai may have suggested h has a kind heart within.
I love it buddy, awesomely written