Hi,
Talking about the photoelectric effect without talking about Einstein who explained it and got a Nobel prize for it? Hmm...
And what about the minimal work that must be provided to extract a photoelectron?
What about the fact that the electron kinetic energy is proportional to the frequency of the photon.
Maybe some quantum mechanics?
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