Celebrating A Milestone Contest

in #scarystory6 years ago

Greetings steemians, here my entry to the Celebrating A Milestone Contest, organized by @julietisrael.

Then I present my work done, I hope you like it:

In the early hours of the dark with its lonely streets you could only hear the noise of the crickets, when Luis walked in a hurry, returning from his workday to bring sustenance to his family. Luis lived with his wife and two children, one of 4 years old and the other of 8 months of age in a neighborhood near a river "El Castan" in an abandoned village of a beautiful and prosperous country in South America.

One day it was 3 am in his usual homecoming Luis felt that they were following him, he was surprised because when he turned around he did not see anyone, he got scared thinking something was not right and he continued the walk, speeding up the step because as he was accelerating he felt that something came over his body, the closer they came to him, Luis panicked and ran and ran so hard that he came to stand a block from his house, but when he stopped on the way to his house there is an alley that has an entrance to the river, this was full of mountain and lonely full of courage he decided to turn to see who was following him and when he stops to look was a shadow, silhouette of a woman dressed in white with a black dog that there was diverted towards the river and crying in search of his dead son, when Luis saw and heard this he felt a refrigerator cold and when they react they run and run without stopping, arriving home touching the door and shouting "open my love ...", door that knocked down the panic because nadi He opened it.

When his wife wakes up because of the scandal Luis was so white so he saw that his wife had him react with some cold water that he put on his face and when he told him, he said: "Luis, that's the encouragement of a woman who These times of the year go through these lonely roads in search of a soul and crying on the banks of the river the loss of his son "we will only frighten her with the cry of a small child. Then his wife woke up her 8-month-old baby with a spanking so that with the child's crying she would leave in peace and forget about Luis. This is the end of Luis' little story that in his life he sought another job to avoid spending the night in the same place.

This short story has about 350 words.


You can find the information in the following link (https://steemit.com/contest/@julietisrael/celebrating-a-milestone-or-20-sbd-giveaway-contest).


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