Losing my Steam
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I'm craving and I'm breaking down
I feel like I'm waiting for something that will never happen
Inch by inch, I'm fading away
I'm in pain, feeling so empty and hopeless.
My insecurities are dragging me down, dragged by the chain I thought would bind me in
I'm feeling really weak yet the stench of failure is intense and deep seated.
How can I stay strong?
Should I just give up and forget?
Or should I continue my journey and pass the storm?
Can someone answer me?
What can I do when I can no longer see hope?
This is my first ever attemp to english poetry world. I would like to take the opportunity to thank the beautiful people who help me out with my composition.
@geke and @sunravelme of TWB for being so helpful and responsive, for your beautiful advises and inputs, I will always bear in mind.
Also to @jossie2214 for being accomodating, I wish to have thoughts like yours. @twotripleow for being my pal when im in need in the channel. Thanks bro! @GMUxx for leading me to TWB. @iwrite, I am silently reading your chats sir! And lastly @surpassinggoogle, for you never lose hope for the minnows.
I may find it so hard to grow in this community at the moment, and maybe my steam is not that as powerful as when I was just starting. But I am always thankful to God I have seen wonderful creations in forms of writing and illustation.
xoxo @wanderinggian21
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steam or steem :)
Lol. It doesn't matter, when you are losing either of those. You are just losing.
Sweet
:)
Galing!
Salamat boss. Wala pa din yan sa kalingkingan nyo ni sir John lol
Awesome!!👍💙🙏
Thank you sir @networkallstar ❤
Though the issue is vague about losing steam, but the character is "hoping' for something we may never know. Thanks wanderinggian21! Hayun o!
Hahaha literally vague boss, I thought the illustrations can tell it all haha
hehehe mam... later na lang me mag-explain ahuhuhu....
Hallo
Love,faith and hope and trust in God the best answer and solution :-)
Thank you too for being my friend and I'm so proud of you. You rawwwkkk my friend!
Thank you friend!!! 😉😉😊
wow galing!
It is always darkest, before the dawn as they say,
And this too shall pass.
There are not many people who are actual failures, and it is good to use poetry as a means to express feelings that may not have words of their own.
Thank you for sharing, as this is your first English post, what is your native language?
Thank you sir! @zombebyte
This is my firat english poem posted. I am from Philippines sir
Bitter truth, I must say. The poem has element of the life which everyone can relate to. Beautiful indeed.
Wunderschön
Thank you sir @inuke
Beautiful
Thank you @cocina.bianca