Your writing is very good... clear, logical development and a sense of enveloping doom that matches the fate of your character. Writing for me, too, is a getaway. People who love language (me, you) enjoy using it in a personal way, I think.
Thanks for answering the Steemconnect question. I'll figure it out, eventually.
Young as you are, I think of you as one of my virtual friends.
Affectionately....me, AG 🌼🙂

Edit here: I did it!! Through Steemworld. It was easier than I thought. @erh.germany sent me there. Just thought I'd let you know. 🙂