Contemplating murder - an original poem

in #runawayrhymes8 years ago (edited)

                           

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I'm so frustrated I can just scream

of peace and quiet I can just dream!

I don't know if it is killing me or making me stronger?

I'm so annoyed and angry and I can take this no longer!

                    

If I had a weapon I would have such fun...

Taking out my enemies one by one...

I would line then up all up in one single row

and with one little bullet ...

I'll take them out like a pro!


Contemplating murder has now calmed me down

but it might leave me stuck with a permanent frown....

Alas...I am alone with my pain

IT IS SOOOO FRUSTRATING TO WORK WITH SOMEONE WITHOUT A BRAIN!

Count to ten they say....why I'm am at eleven!!!!

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Damn. This was interesting. I thought about Violent J right away.

Good! ... watch your step!!!😈

I enjoyed reading your poem, Giantbear! Keep up the good work.
Upvoted & Followed you as well.

Thank you @lazariko12 Just saw the challenge and decided to quickly write this! I checked out your blog now. Upvoted your latest post and following you now.

Anyone who says they have never felt like this is either a saint or a liar! Great poem.

Ha ha true...I really felt like this today..luckily I calmed down😁

Great poem giant bear. Feel the same

I was past angry...lol..at least I cooled down a bit now. 😀

Amazing I have had only 8 votes on George Michael. This is really telling me the feed button is not working or people don't know how to use it. Most of the people I have voted on have not reciprocated. If this goes on I am quitting for good

Oh no @ianstrat you can't quit! A few more months and we will all see a difference. Don't give up please. You are one of the few that really appreciate others. Just do it for fun in the meantime. Rome wasn't built in one day.....just keep on steeming!

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