Rhymes for Dimes - Dream Girl

in #rhyme6 years ago

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I take you by the hand
Lead you to a stop
Twirl you round and round
Listen to that sound
Laughs and giggles, all abound
I pull you close to me
Hold your waist, bended knee
Pushing back your hair
Looking classy, debonair
Taking in your stare
That moment, not a care
Place my hand upon your ear
A wildflower, to appear
Your smile beaming, crystal clear
A beauty by design
In the essence of time
An amazing soul, profound
In a crowd, you will astound
I lose you in the mist
Don’t give up, I persist
Yes, it was a dream
But real for me it seemed



         
         

As always, have a great day and PEACE

         
         


         
         

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Hey PK. This is a beautiful rhyme. It has been some time between your rhymes. Glad you are writing them again. Love the wildflower!

Thank you beeyou! Yes it's been 2-3 weeks since my last rhyme, but they will keep appearing every so often. I enjoy writing them too much to! stop. It's just so relaxing and a nice way to take a break from the everyday world. I knew you would really like this one 😇. Have a great day!

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Dude, these sweet words will melt any lady. You have a gift with words. Ever thought of making greeting cards?

PLEASE HELP - They are all trying to break my door down!

Lol @ the greeting cards! I will retire now, and do this for a living 😁

Nows that’s a problem that I wouldn’t mind having.

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