It is a nice first attempt :)
I'm not sure what to think of the game, some things I liked and some other are not really my cup of tea, but it looks nice from here, I might end up trying it when it's on sale.
Keep at it! Maybe aim for shorter and a bit more conceptual videos, but that's me, you find your own style :D
Thank you for checking out the vid and for the awesome feedback :)
I like the idea of Final Impression, but indeed I need to polish it a bit more, maybe even script it a bit :)
Game on!