RAP CHALLENGE WEEK #15 SUBMISSION

in #rapchallenge7 years ago (edited)

Keeping the spirit alive.


LYRICS

I never used to rap
Cus I disagree with the dissing
Somehow I feel, there's a point that we all are jus missing
Insisting superiority over a similar victim
We're all in the same boat, none of us came over swimming
Its funny, claiming righteousness
But selling your hommies for money
Books filled with hooks,
On how to, properly create a dummy
It's pointless, deranged,
And I find it confusing
Why is our music,
The only one that's delinquent inducing
How can we be murderers
When we kill with the mic
Hatred and violence and jealousy
We try to incite
Dominance for a moment
Then go back to your place
You don't belong here, not with that black face
Hold up, call the cops
He's got a gun, shoot first, that damn nigga
He tried to run, he's laying down,
and clutching his side
Yo, I swear that mofo reached
For the piece at his side
Oops, my mistake, forgot that i fired
One more for good measure
Okay, now rap for me child
Tell me how gansta you are,
And how much coke you can slide
How much you dominate your brothers and how much you fight
How you're gunna win this war this war,
Going on in your mind
While we commoditize you and fill you with false pride
Feed you for a day, dress you up and take you for a ride
While your brothers getting shot down, trying to make it overnight
We hate the music but we love it cus it does the job right

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Nice rap, you flow with the rhythm. I don't know what are the lyrics are about, but you sing well. Smoking is bad though.

Thanks for listening and commenting.

Man o man love this bud, especially that jolt of energy at the end.

your lyrics so deep and insightful. There is beauty in the struggle, but that doesn't make it any easier to go thru.

My favorite lines were "Feed you for a day, dress you up and take you for a ride. While your brothers getting shot down, trying to make it overnight."

Man o man preach.

Appreciate you sharing your thoughts and insights with us.

God bless.

Namaste

Thanks bro, i always will. As editunpopular as my thoughts may be ;)

Ayyyyyy exactly even more so ;)

Keep doing great things

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