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RE: 🎤 STEEMIT RAP CHALLENGE WEEK #9 SUBMISSION THREAD - WHO WILL TAKE THE CROWN?? 🎧
Nice flow throughout the verse. This had a heartfelt emotional vibe to it. The sincerity makes this compelling in a lot of ways.
Favorite lines:
Beleiving the meaning of trust
Is like a foot step in the sand
It fades, degrades
And becomes just a moment of lust
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