Steemit #Rapchallenge Week 8 Submission - Stop Foolin' Yourself

in #rapchallenge7 years ago

Hey Steemit, back with some SteemHop!

Yet another submission for the #rapchallenge of week 8. Shout out to @rondonson for hosting this, give him some love and support if you can! Shoutout to all the judges, to @alao for donating to the cause and all the contestants that will be participating this week!

Click here to check out this week's Rap Challenge Submission Post

My Submission

This time I chose the ''9th Wonder'' instrumental, from a song called ''Stop Fooling Yourself''. The beat just put a spell on me and I zoned out to the fullest, making this dope verse that I personally enjoy so much, not in a selfish way at all, but more in a fulfilling or satisfying way. It's like having that feeling when you know you did something great in a certain skill you've been practicing for a decent or even a long time. It just gave me a lot of positive vibes and I hope it will give you some of that same energy!

Feel free to give it a listen, you wont be dissapointed :)

Oh, and don't mind my tired face in the video though, haven't slept too much this week and I was really trying to focus on my voice and pronounciation, especially with the fast parts of the verse.

Stop Foolin' Yourself

Lyrics:

First of all, here to call, all of you my brothers
Steemit is the place to be and our bond is getting stronger,
no longer, can I hold it back, so here is some of
the flava and the bars, that flow sweet like butter,

this beat, I slaughter, the heat, I brought it, this week, no question
you think I'm insane, rather that than bein' averaged
no time to slack off, no I am on a staycation
I'm seekin' the truth, you only seek for validation

I'm drillin' the ceilin'
and fillin' this feelin'
and killin' your hearin',
while spillin' my illness
my realness is steamin'/Steeming
I'm breathing the flow that I'm speakin'
cause reaching with words is my meaning,
you feel me?
I'm livin' my dreams and I'm dreaming the life that I'm seekin'
I'm chasin' my Demons for various reasons,
it's open season

and that was just a sample, a quick example
a fraction, of that syllable stuff that I can handle
you can't touch my mad flow, you mad bro? I'm out of this place
your sky is the limit? Well my style exceeds Space

I'm workin' and grindin', you're sleepin' and quiet
I'm rhymin' and tryin', you're whinin' and cryin'
I'm sickened and tired of phonies and liars
of beggars 'n biters, of wack-rap-line-writers
my fire shines brighter, this flow is quite viral
my signs gettin' vital, my temprature rises,
my bloodpressure rises, my double R tightens
my vision is dire and I might inspire

you, with this song,
but you're too stupid, stop foolin' yourself son

If you are interested, you can check out more of my music at:
Youtube
Soundcloud

For more art, music and what not, you can follow me @benja.

I hope you have a good day!

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and last but not least,

Steem On!

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De kat krabt de krullen van de trap.

Fluently!

Man, you can handle your raps!

I try my best, thanks man, your support is so much appreciated, I mean that sincerely bro!

Wow! Its really cool! No more words. Nothing to add. Thanks! :)

thank you!

gotta feed on something right? Thanks fam!

You'll have to wait your turn, sir.

Habla, blah blah blah blah blah, Español for my bunghole...

Many thanks man, glad you liked it!

Holy shit this one is nice man!

Thanks a lot bro, appreciate it to the fullest!

Yeah man you'll see in my analysis here soon. but this was the first perfect entry I have scored since Week 2 just saying. You are progressing at a rapid pace, prepare for a @benja takeover :)

Really feel humbled man, can't wait to read the post. I always like to see how everyones work is positively analysed and complimented, with feedback to feed on for the next one.

Wow thank you so much for that, because Lord does they are a GRIND to get through hahaha but i know it will help maybe get someones dreams to come true. so why wouldn't I at least try my best to do something that gives back. But it is live now if you want to take a look.

Namaste my brother namaste :)

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