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Beautiful!! Nothing else to be said!

great level!!

I really dig that light. Thought it was about to be a Pdiddy style music video for a second and you would come out in front of the light in a real shiny suit or something, lol.

I really liked your content and scheme man. You definitely have the finer aspects of your rhyme scheme completely ironed out and it shows. I feel like would've been better not to be bent over when doing these type of live rhyming, it made you have less air in your lungs. Less air means less able to deliver your rhymes.

Anyway man, really loved this shit.

Yea I don't usually play my stuff after I record. It's feel weird hearing myself. I did look over this one and saw some areas of improvement and one of them breathing control. The light was a last minute thing. I figured it would add a cool effect.

Yea, I really dig that light. Was like ahhhhh shit.

Dope though man, really.

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