@Rondonson's Rap Challenge # 7: Taste Nate Entry - "Respiration" FreeVerse

in #rapchallange7 years ago (edited)

Peace Y'all,
My Hip Hop brothers @hashbrown and @verbal-d got me on here to spit some bars fro y'all. Hi-Tek is one of my favorite Boom Bap producers of all time so It was not very difficult to write to this. Let me know what you think.
Much Love
T.N.

Lyrics:

So beyond the norm
I can't cling to form
Lay some glycrin on the petal
Watch the haters swarm
Frequent flower miles
File shares frost non resist
10000 things had it all
Lost Allah it
1000 pound psycho paths
Exploding "breathe gas"
On Battlefield earth
Mining for gold caps
Roll through the hood
Wink at the blind followers
Abraham Linkin Park ing lot of them
He used to practice Shock value
In the land of no reactions
New agers blaming rape culture
On the law of attraction
Headlines didn't gain a buzz cut
Claiming he consist
Robinson Carueso
Your Crew so canibalist

Moody Bafoons quick to press on your cacoon
Wanna stash you in their shit
Like a drug with balloons
Sending love to all the boys
With the same clothes and starter shoes
Stars in yous
This bars for you
Enkidu hold a lion king
Express the god to you
Open up your Shakti
Crawl from out your phases
Wake a chapter in your Genesis
While the flood
Displaces
Change canal
Of framework
Tuning love from hatred
Still more work to be done
But none for enslavement
No more free shows
You better pay us all in crypto
new world order givers
Can only win if you a schizo
Check my rider is you listo?

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Hi welcome you are a very good rapper. A big upvote from me @moonleesteem 🔝

Thank you! Appreciate the feedback


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Nice dude. You have a typo on your tag #rapchallenge. Need to change the a to an e. That way it will show up in the right category.

lol i copied it from another contestant

Taste Nate barring up the rap challenge with wisdom and lyricism, I love how you rap with passion bro, it truly shows and reaches across and grabs the listeners
Music is life changing, you are more than capable.

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Great article!

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